Perfecting Poetry

I have determined there are a four key things to do in order to write better poems. Two of them I already knew and one other I suspected. But the third has completely caught me off-guard.

Over the past few months I’ve been taking a Poetry Writing class, which has challenged me in many ways. These challenges, although sometimes frustrating, have allowed me to grow as a poet.

I’ve been writing poetry off and on since 1999. During these thirteen years I’ve taken English classes, creative writing classes, read poetry books, read poetry essays, written poetry essays, and written a poem a day for a month. But I have evolved more as a poet in these past three months than the previous thirteen years.

The highest point so far from this course came this week when the rough draft of my latest poem came back with no suggestions for revision from my professor. She always finds some word choice, structure, or other element in the poem to critique and recommend a change on. But not for this one.

I can’t say I’ve “arrived” yet as a poet, but I have a feeling I have at least a few poems that will be accepted for publication. My confidence in my poetry is at an all-time high. And it is all because of these four things:

1. Write More Poetry – This really should be a given for anyone who writes. The more you do something, the better you will become. A blank page won’t get accepted for publication, and the words don’t just magically appear on the page. And, no matter how busy your schedule might seem, there is always time to write. Even if that means waking up earlier or carrying a small notebook and pen with you everywhere you go. If you want to write more often, you will find the time.

2. Read More Poetry – This is another given for writers. A person who writes Mystery novels will read a lot of other mystery novels. Poets have it lucky because there aren’t many novel-length poems that we would have to read. I personally think that the best thing to do is read a variety of poems, spanning across different poetic movements. Read the old, the really old, and the new. Read local and read poems from around the globe. It is easy to stick to a poet or an era you love the most, but that can only take you so far.

3. Use Writing Prompts – It seems like so many of the prompts are meant for poets because they focus on one moment, one scene, one idea. This is a free idea factory for any poet, which takes away the whole writer’s block excuse before it even starts. They also serve another purpose, which is to move you out of the comfort zone. We all have those topics we return to over and over. The prompt moves you into uncharted territory, which is why it also goes well with number four…

4. Experiment – This applies to topics, but also to something far more beneficial. Write poems (note this is plural, meaning do each one more than once!) in new formats, like the sonnet. If you always capitalize the first word of each line, try writing poems without capitalization. If  each line is always a complete thought, write poems where the only line ending with a period or comma is the last line. Mix things up, sprint so far past your comfort zone that you can’t see it any more. This class has forced me to do just that. One of my best poems was also the hardest one to write the rough draft for. I’ve not only discovered new formats for poetry, but I’ve also found that my natural style of writing a poem isn’t anything like what I wrote for thirteen years.

What are some of the things you think are most important for becoming a better poet or writer? Is there one thing that has helped you grow more than any other?

Brief Chance Interaction

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Brief Chance Interaction

            A young woman watches the snow fall outside the window, wondering if her day could get any worse. Her Mondays are always like this. Her hair is a mess because her alarm didn’t go off this morning, making her late for work. There is a small tear in the arm of her shirt because it got caught on one of the machines. Her pale skin has red, blotchy spots where coffee has been spilled on her. A chocolate syrup stain is prevalent on the right corner of her apron. She glances at the clock and sighs, realizing she has only been here for an hour.

The bitter chill of winter creeps through the door as a new patron steps into the Starbucks. He shakes snow off his brown leather shoes, taking care not to track water across the floor as the snow melts. He unravels a beige scarf as he crosses the shop and heads to the counter. His entry is unremarkable, yet the way he composes himself commands the attention of everyone in the store.

He does not lean on the counter, nor shift weight from one leg to the other as he calmly orders his beverage. A gloved hand reaches into the pocket of his ironed khakis, removing an earth-toned billfold. The server smiles kindly as she takes the credit card from his hand, swiping the magnetic strip through their machine. She meets his gaze as she reaches to hand it back, but her grip is imperfect and the card clatters on the counter. Her pale complexion turns crimson as she mumbles an apology, eyes cast at her feet, but the gentle response of the gentleman brings confidence back under her command.

They both reach for the card, hands grazing unintentionally. Their eyes lock momentarily, and he smiles before placing his card back in his billfold. He steps around the counter to wait for his drink, aloofly watching the girl as she helps the next person in line. Her face is alive and serene, as though his gentle interaction has granted her an angelic fluidity and grace. The gentleman takes his steaming coffee and shares one final smile with the young woman before braving the cold outside. The young woman hums a tune to herself as she works, her day brightened by a brief chance interaction.

5 Songs That Made Me Want To Play Guitar

One of the blogs that I follow is I Can’t Brain Today, and today’s post covered the five songs that made him want to play guitar. It was great to get a chance to read what songs have inspired him musically, and it got me to thinking about some of the songs that stick out in my mind. Before I get into the songs, I’ll give a little bit of background.

No, I don’t currently own a guitar. I borrowed one for a few weeks last year and enjoyed it in the brief time I could spare between work and homework, and it confirmed my belief that I want to learn to play and someday get decent at it. And I’m sure I won’t surprise too many people when I declare that Guitar Hero really is what got me to thinking about playing the instrument.

I spent months of agony going from struggling on Medium difficulty, moving into frustration by adding the fifth fret, and eventually getting to the point where I could hold my own on Expert with most songs. It comes as no surprise that, during the course of the day, three of the five songs that have stuck for this list were featured in the first Guitar Hero game. It really sparked my desire to play the guitar, and all three of the songs are old classic rock songs.

Hopefully by this time next year I’ll be able to write about learning to play the guitar on a real instrument. At this point I’m not picky between Acoustic or Electric, although ultimately I’ll be getting an Electric Guitar to rock out on.

I think when we buy a house it’ll have to have good insulation in at least one room…

5. Smoke on the Water – Deep Purple

This was the song that inspired me to pick up the Guitar Hero instrument and give the game a chance. The intro to this song is recognizable to almost anyone who has listened to any Classic Rock. In the short time I was borrowing a guitar, I learned those chords and enjoyed playing just a few seconds of the awesomeness that is this song. I can hardly wait until the day when I can play the full song. Then I will know that the Guitar Hero has been replaced by a real Guitarist.

4. Cocaine – Eric Clapton

Eric Clapton is one of the greatest guitar geniuses to ever live. In my early years I had a cassette of Slowhand, and I played the first side of it to death. This song is anti-drug if you listen to the lyrics, the guitar in it is memorable, and the solo is fantastic.

3. Comfortably Numb – Pink Floyd

It is hard to choose a favorite Pink Floyd song, but the guitar solos on this song have always been something I was fond of. I have to confess that I’ve tried to vocally imitate the guitar solos when driving in the car, or while listening to this song while home alone.

2. Texas Flood – Stevie Ray Vaughn

This is a slow, bluesy song by another one of my favorite guitarists. But if you listen to how fast some of those guitar parts are, you realize his fingers are blazing even on this song. If I had to pick a favorite song overall by Stevie Ray Vaughn it would be Pride and Joy, but even the guitar part on that can’t compare to this one. This was probably my second-most played song on Guitar Hero, and I loved every minute of frantic struggle to hit all the colored frets almost as much as when I played…

1. Crossroads – Cream

Yes, this is another great guitar part by Eric Clapton. His early years were absolutely brilliant, and his solos reflected how great his talent was. I’ve read that Cream was marketed to be a band that was better live than in album. Which is probably why a fair portion of their “Wheels of Fire” album contains live tracks, including this song. If you like great guitar solos, you can’t go wrong with live versions of Cream because they are all incredible.

So there you have it, the five songs that have inspired me more than any others to learn the guitar. It surprised me, when I got to thinking about it, that my favorite two Bands/Artists didn’t make the cut with any of their tracks, but David Bowie and Queen don’t need epic guitar parts to make great music.

What are some of the songs whose guitar parts stick out to you?